
Developing Heroes and the Heroines
by Karen Rose Smith
The following article first appeared in New Jersey Romance Writers'
newsletter, The Heartline Herald. Permission to reprint is granted
to sister RWA Chapters with proper credit to author and chapter.
I write deeply emotional books. I'm often asked "how do you
that?" The answer is easy. I choose heroes and heroines-or they
choose me-who have emotional conflicts. My characters drive my books
and tell me what the plot will be.
When writers ask me how I develop my heroes and heroines, I realize
the process is instinctual now, not entirely conscious. I do remember
how I began. In the first book I wrote, my heroine was completely
perfect. In my second book, my heroine had too many problems to count.
And somehow through the years, I've realized heroes and heroines
need flaws as well as the virtues that make them true heroes and
heroines. But not so many that they can't find answers and solutions
in the course of the book. So where do I begin?
My story idea sometimes begins with the conflict. Usually my hero
or heroine comes to life when I think about that conflict. Where
does the conflict come from? Usually from the hero's or heroine's
past. What type of background will emphasize the conflict and give
it the most punch? Your character's background makes him/her think
a certain way, act in a certain way, speak in a certain way. All
are unique to that character because of his/her background.
If your hero was raised in an orphanage with no sense of belonging,
he will probably not know how to love-unless he remembers his mother's
love before she died, unless a mentor taught him values, unless a
catastrophe changed the course of his life. I build a background
step by step, considering future story events and the way I want
my characters to react to them-and grow. The growth is all-important
to a satisfying conclusion.
Motivation-enhanced by background and stimulated by growth-propels
conflict which makes the romance strong. That motivation springs
from your character's background.
I've used character charts on occasion, but usually would rather
invest my time in simply writing my heroes and heroines and getting
to know them that way. I begin with short bios. If I find I need
direction while writing, I have a few questions I answer as if I
were my hero or heroine. To make them memorable, a writer must be
inside their heads and hearts. If I have trouble getting into either,
I use the following list of questions to help.
Finish these phrases as if you were your hero or heroine.
--My vocation is...
--I laugh about...
--My mother taught me...
--My view of men came from...
--My view of women came from...
--My favorite memory from my childhood is...
--My worst memory from childhood is...
--I wish I could...
--My greatest fault is...
--I am happiest when...
--The place I've always wanted to visit is .............because
--When I look at the stars, I feel ....
--My favorite holiday is ....................because ......................
--I'm afraid that someday I will .....
--The greatest influence in my life is ....
--Work is my....
--I sleep when I'm ...
--My mother ...
--Women usually ...
--My favorite food is...
--No one knows better than I do that ...
--My greatest weakness is that ...
--My worst fear is that ...
--I am happiest when ...
The point of the exercise is to get to know your hero and heroine-inside
and out -so you can speak, think and act for him or her-so you can
be him or her.
Once you have the first part of your couple, you work on the second
half. What type of person will contrast the best or complement the
best? What type of background will cause the most conflict between
the two of them? What will keep them from their goals? What will
eventually show them they are better together than apart? What can
they teach each other? How can they heal each other? What is the
one gift the hero can give the heroine that she will cherish the
rest of her life and vice versa? Is it trust? Compassion? Understanding?
A home? A sense of belonging?
Developing multi-dimensional heroes and heroines will give your
romance vibrant texture, intense conflict, and a satisfying resolution.
If you build each aspect of their lives carefully, they will take
over and write their own story, and you can sit back and enjoy what
they become!
To make characters memorable, you must know them. You must be inside
their heads, you must be them. You must get to know your hero and
heroine more intimately than you know yourself. Great heroes and
heroines can develop great books when a writer gives them voice,
conflict, and depth. I learn with my characters and I learn from
my characters. If a writer can find the key to the hero's and heroine's
emotions, she/he will unlock a deeply emotional story.
Karen Rose Smith has published over fifty romances and is a
winner of the NJRW Golden Leaf Award as well as the Desert Quill
Award. A former English teacher, she writes full-time and can't
imagine doing anything else! Visit Karen's website at www.karenrosesmith.com.
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